Tuesday, December 18, 2018

Awesome Animals

Hyegon: A brown silverish coat with black spots scattered all over the Hyegon, it also has a long tail almost a meter and a half long with one big spike at the end of it. With a wingspan of two meters it can fly up to three days with no rest and hunts its prey with the huge yellow horns on top of his strong furry head where its humongous furry ears sit. It has a long black flowing tail and only eats bones and centaur blood, the Hyegon is actually a kind loving animal and is perfect for a pet, and loves to help people in need.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Isla! Nice Work. I really liked how unquie your beast is. is it based on a hyena? Next time you should try and split it into paragraph because than it makes more sense. I also really like how freindly it is. Also how would it get the blood?

    Until Next Time!!

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  2. Hi Isla!

    My name is Ellee, I work with Allie on the Summer Learning Journey crew!
    I hope you have had an amazing Christmas and New Years?

    Woah! This Hyegon sounds pretty awesome! If I had a beast that liked to help me out and it could fly I would never pay for plane tickets again! That is amazing that he can fly for three days straight - where would you fly him to?

    That's awesome that he hunts with his horns, I also like that you have listed the specific food he likes to eat.... I wonder where he hunts for these things?

    I really like your thorough description of your beast, great use of adjectives - I think I would have one for a pet for sure!

    Keep up the great work Isla, I hope to see you back blogging soon!
    Ellee :)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.